I intended to finish a new draft of the first chapter tonight. I got sidetracked with a friend in a conversation about race and hiphop, though. So, instead of finishing a draft, I polished up the transitions and terms.
Before I began, I did topics of each of the paragraphs. This made the areas of weakness readily apparent.
I think I fixed many of the issues with life story v. narrative identity v. personal myth. I’ve decided that having all three of these terms is necessary if only for quoting purposes.
All that’s left to do tomorrow is bring in some outside sources for agency, communion, and imagoes. I think I’m going to try to bring in Robert Johnson for imagoes.